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Referred to many aspects of Migrain and genre
Good use of Shep
Good links to narrative
lots of contexts points
Good links to feminist theories
Good links to other media issues and debates
Clear points and conclusion
EBI
Lots of small errors
Could use more aspects of Shep
Need to refer to my text more often
Targets for Essay
Check punctuation
Use more key concepts
Must use media language more
Include Laura Mulvey on a more regular basis
Use smaller footnotes
Get rid of headings
Bibliography
Put down more books
Refer to more films
Include word count
Next step
The next step I need to take to bring my independent study up to the next level is to Proofread the whole essay carefully and while doing that improve the accuracy and expressions I used. This will help me to see where i have gone wrong in the past and what specific things i need to put right in order to improve on the level i am currently working on.
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